We,the Pretenders?!

               They talk about originals. They talk about unfeigned. The talk about pukka. But the thing is we are all the same,always trying to satisfy others. Always trying to be the real ones,the genuine ones. Hiding ourselves inside out, concealing our souls, obscuring our aspirations. Always seeing the cracks of others,in the broken mirrors created by our own minds.And in the end,we are the unalloyed! Creatures besides us are frivolous,imposters and pseuds.

But it’s complicated,you know.Sometimes I wonder,are we all the same underneath or just the pretenders?!

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About amnajaved

A brat,trying to adjust.
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4 Responses to We,the Pretenders?!

  1. This seems to me as your first writing.
    Your vocab is impressive. Your way of elaborating different aspects of life is beautiful too. Overall, it is the message which leaves the reader in awe and gives him a chance to step out of his life and have a look on himself.
    It would have been wonderful to read it in the form of a story with characters revolving around the theme of the story. But, I guess, you were not looking to write a story, you were desperate to just write down your thoughts about this double-standard world.
    I have read another story of yours “Haltering Chains”. Most important thing about this story is the vivid description you used….I loved it.
    Looking forward to read your other writings. Keep writing 🙂

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  2. usman425 says:

    This seems to me as your first writing.
    Your vocab is impressive. Your way of elaborating different aspects of life is beautiful too. Overall, it is the message which leaves the reader in awe and gives him a chance to step out of his life and have a look on himself.
    It would have been wonderful to read it in the form of a story with characters revolving around the theme of the story. But, I guess, you were not looking to write a story, you were desperate to just write down your thoughts about this double-standard world.
    I have read another story of yours “Haltering Chains”. Most important thing about this story is the vivid description you used….I loved it.
    Looking forward to read your other writings. Keep writing 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Soha Salman says:

    I just read it. Truly impressive!

    Liked by 1 person

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